Unthought

A couple of weeks ago, I started writing this but, as I was interrupted, inspiration’s gone. So, I’ll leave it to you. How would you end it?

You feel like crying
But you can’t.
You feel like fleeing
But…

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5 thoughts on “Unthought

  1. You feel like crying
    But you know that you can’t.
    You feel like fleeing
    But there’s nowhere to dart
    You want away with the pain
    but it’s all stuck to your heart.

  2. Amazing how you described someone else’s feeling so perfectly. I wonder if I am that transparent…
    Thanks for your kind contribution 🙂

  3. It’s a pleasure. I never noticed the reply. Thanks for the thanks.

    Crayfish: Thanks for the thanks.
    Tizz: Thank-you for thanking me.
    Crayfish: Oh, I’m thankful for such politeness.
    Tizz: You are most welcome.
    Crayfish: What are we thanking eachother about. I’ve already forgotten.

    Tizz – were you demonstrating your English politeness?

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